For my project I wrote about what writing is. I asked my mom, a friend in class, and a coworker and explained there thought process. I then gathered my own thoughts before and after reading the first chapter. Lastly I used information from the book.
It was easy to plan out what I wanted to write about and how. However, the harder part was trying to figure out a good flow and a better ending.
Peer reviewers could help me the most by finding a better way to flow the paragraphs and helping me find a better way of closing the last paragraph of the project. I could really use help with different format for the paper, because lets be honest no one wants to read a long essay.
Jessica Breving - Portfolio 
I enjoyed your first paragraph it was very well written and kept me interested in reading the rest of the paper.
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