My assignment is covering my thoughts on reading and writing, where it has got me in life, and my literacy sponsors along the way.
What I am asking from my peer reviews:
I still need to add another paragraph or two. However, I still need help on what two make the other paragraphs about and not repeat myself. I know at times I do not give tons of detail, if you theres somewhere you think is lacking detail just let me know.
Jessica Breving - Portfolio 
You had a great flow. Sentences flowed nicely together
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Great word choice
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Needs to be a little longer
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I also like the format you used. The way you set it up in little paragraphs were nice because we all know nobody likes to read long paragraphs
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I loved your paper, I liked the part where you talked about your experiences with not fitting in and pushing away reading.
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Maybe something you could do is finish off your paper by talking about if you ever got back into reading, or more of your experiences in school.
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Another thing you could do is just make sure everything is formatted and centered correctly, and look out for misspellings.
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Overall I thought you paper was really good, I love the personal stories and how you have grown as a reader and writer.
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I really like the structure of the format you are using, it personalizes the narrative, excellent choice of layout!
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Your examples of reading were great, I am really sorry people would pick on you over something they should have been doing!
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I have always liked the thriller/ horror genre type books, I find them much easier to read than boring plane-faced text books. What types of books did the higher levels of reading classes make you read? I’d love to hear a few examples !
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The last sentence of the last written paragraph made my day, I am thrilled you came to the conclusion of being happy is the only thing that matters. It shows an elder level of thought perception which I found only comes from experience of study. Great work on the assignment!
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